
I received this book free to review from Netgalley. It is a very poorly written YA dystopian novel. The idea is interesting and I was able to read the whole book, which is why I gave it a rating of 2 rather than 1, but the writing really is rather dreadful. In this book, nineteen year old Piri, who lives in a city in the sky connected to the earth by a very large column, is accidentally dropped to earth when a transport he is riding in is struck by lightening. He is rescued by a boy his age named Niko and taken to live with a group of the ground dwellers, who Piri did not even know existed. While Piri and the people who live in the city are small and pale skinned and blonde, Niko and the ground dwellers who call themselves "the Children" are darker skinned and speak the same English that the city dwellers speak, with a few Spanish words thrown in. The third group of people is the Scavs, large, and fierce and barbaric who paint themselves black with the "black stuff from the pits".
The world-building is incomplete partly because the writer does not name things. The city in the clouds is merely "the City", the flat round stone disks that make light are not named by the city people or the "Children", bees are not named but are referred to as "flying things with stingers" by the "Children" just to give a few examples. The grammar is poor and some words are misused - for instance the word "dramatic" was used where "traumatic" should have been used - twice.
In this book, religion is used to control and manipulate the poor, deluded "Children" and homosexuality is seen as normal and natural. I suspect that is why some people like the book - and why others will not like it. However, even if people are looking for that theme and really like it and want to read books that extol those concepts, it does not excuse the poor writing. The book ends with a possible cliffhanger and if the author intends to write any more books, I do hope that he takes some writing classes, gets an editor, and gives some thought to naming things in order to improve his stories.